Patrick_Ugabi

Looks promising, long and perfect chapter, looking forward to more

Haven't read it yet, but come on can't we get new ideas this days? We tired of the Bella's brother and MC being related and tied to Bella what's the benefit there, what's so special about the Swans. Creativity is hard but come on, every fanfic is just a rewrite of previous ideas of other authors , maybe do fanfics that aren't common Like I'm tired of seeing HP fanfics, and there are all bs Hopefully this is worth the read and not a chat got product An alpha , let's see

RIP to him🤣🤣

He took the job I'm out Just focus on club, he doesn't even spend enough time with his new girlfriend and kids, y take on more responsibilities

Let him leave They haven't shown even a little support for him Or even a bit of respect

Definitely 50/50 so far You don't notice it that much Great job so far Can't wait for him to find out the type of world he's in

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Thanks for the chap keep it coming

moreeeee

That's a great year of course, filled with opportunities Looking forward to more, I hope he stays a club and business owner, I've seen countless people try to make their club owners (MC) to be the club coach(thou I've only seen one novel succeed and I'm a huge fan of it, Millwall, maybe you could take some inspirations from it) Keep the chapters coming bro