Lemon_wrights
I’m a young aspiring artist/writer :D
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hey guys it's me lemon and I just want to say thanks for all the support and love around this novel. Sorry if so e days I don't post chapters or I post but they are super short. I am working on school and suffering from writer's block. I hope to provide you guys with good content and chapters. sincerely - Lemon
Thats what i was thinking lolllll
Ok, I think the story could be a lot better if you didn't rush it at the start and instead went into more detail about the mc and the world around her. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar could have been better and made the book more professional like instead of using "u" it should have been "you". that's all I needed to say. But the overall pretty cool concept, just a little rushed.