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me don't care, me need mc fubuki *thrust* *thrust* already
I think you should give what you have picked for the mc
The few chapters, The grammar was a little whacky, And some word's are missing, But eventually it gets better so good job, Your updates in chapters are very fast, But that will affect your grammar mistakes, So i recommend atleast slowing it down, The MC itself is pretty nice, I enjoy reading this so far
I have got to say, This is very good keep up the work :D ..................................................................................
IT'S GOOD, HOPE TO SEE MORE OF THIS[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really great so far :D, Hope to see more soon this has lots of potential😇😔😣😔😣[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It has good potential, please keep writing i love it so far :D [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]