Once upon a time, there existed a man named crocs. Crocs was a man and he was alive. He lived and did things that alive people do. Crocs was a cool living guy. Now, crocs is dead. Am crocs. Am ded.
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Welp I'm a little late so I guess I lost the "first comment" crown, but I'm back at it again again with an obligatory five star self-review! Transcendent Gene is different from anything I've written before since it's futuristic fantasy with a lot more modern elements, but it's been really fun so far. When it comes to questions I should answer here... Well, for one, I don't know if it'll be harem for now. Most likely, it'll only be one wife. Two wives at most, but that depends on vibes :) Anyway, the rest is all for y'all to find out when you read. I'll be going ahead, so I'll see y'all on the other side!
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See I knew I accidentally wrote mana somewhere but I was never able to find it so this is an amazing comment to get
I'm about to speed run all of these corrections let's see how long it takes me to get them done
Your first two complaints are understandable, because those are mistakes I intentionally had him make, so it's really just a matter of preference, but what about the last? Atlas has definitely also been working for what he's received and I would say that his luck is a lot worse than Damien's, especially if you just look at the first hundred or two hundred chaps. I'm curious about what makes you feel like he's being handed everything.
Most likely, it's the same as the other ones where I just didn't catch it in editing 😅
Nope. This is another mistake I didn't catch that was part of the old concept before it got changed into what it is now
Oops lol it was the original name of the Heavenly Unification Law before the concept changed
That was the main inspiration for the idea lol but I promise it's a vastly different story