BlackRaven_

so i read it all, and my overall evaluation is not bad, it is nice to be honest, it is well balanced and doesn't really just make girls fall for him, there is reason behind emotions, thank God for that and the author thank him too i guess, anyhow word building is also quite good. the power system is alright i would say. over all as i mentioned before "not bad"

i haven't started reading yet, I was like I have seen the word sefirah castle somewhere just can't remember where?? you know the feeling of something on the top of your tongue and not remembering what it was, as I was thinking this i scrolled down, see all the anime name and all the and at the end I see LOTM, "ah they are also adding lotm" I said pressed back, and started scrolling again, "wait a min"i paused for a second or two, I go back "did i read it right???" i questioned myself, and read the title of the fanfiction, "what the actual fu**??" had my brain lagging for a second when I read it right. now then I am done telling, I will read it now. happy Reading everyone.

Thanks I'll check them out, i have read about 38 chaps so far, i noticed that the dialogue is way too short, you are just telling the readers, what the characters are doing inside of showing, ur paragraph: (I even have my hands covered in mana now. But just then, before the dagger could get in contact with me... "[Bang]" I heard a voice behind me. And the next thing I knew... Thud- The goblin that was about to stab my eye was on the ground, dead.) i picked this up randomly while reading. explain more, as I said ur telling the readers not showing, you can improve on that, tho i hope it improves later on, and plz reduce the use of sounds, like tap tap etc, ur using them way too much untill now, other then that I have seen few mistakes in ur spelling but it's once in 12 or 13 chaps, Overall it's a great story so far. anyhow best of luck mate I look forward to reading ur novels in the future as well.

thankyou, thankyou, thankyou. i have been trying to find a nice novel to read which is not just ntr and harem. if you can please suggest me some novels that are actually good. plz I beg of you my lord and savior Jes- i mean author sama.

no prob, it's good for your review and it's not like it's a lie, your chapters are long, if they remain like that or just be 2k words in the future is not related to the current review.

a good novel, over all its really good. The writing quality is quite good, the story is developing quite smoothly without any problem, character design is also good, updates should be good idk I read the whole fanfiction in one sitting, world background is well thought. and please don't add multiple partners for mc the current one is quite perfect. the chapters are really long for people who are looking at the chapter. it's been a fun read I hope you continue writing in ur free time. if you need any help then please don't hesitate to ask.

now this is something herem, novels never show i wanna see a mc that got aids because of his multiple partners and the life he lives known that he has limited time

thanks

tell me the name of that fic

I have seen people say it's a bad story, the mc is illogical, and whatnot. for those i would say what part of being an eldritch being so you not understand? An eldritch is a being that acts of what it wants and doesn't care for much else, i have been written eldritch characters for a novel I have been working on for some time and this here is one of the of not the only correct representation of how am eldritch should act. keep up the good work, author san. love your work I'll support you on patreon too when i can, I go by echo you will know when I come.