Marcus_Phantom

For the sake to not ruin the ratings for this story for those that want to read or actually enjoys it. But I got to chap 2 and ended it their. I can never under why writers for fanfictions that involve HSoTD decide to add stuff from other supernatural worlds. To me it completely destroys the whole concept of a zombie apocalypse. Like yhe systems or the blessing from a goddess. If you wanted to add stuff from other worlds use series like Dead Rising, Resident Evil or even Left for dead they would fit a lot more. I want to see more stories for this anime but I'm tired of seeing the MC is pretty much a Isekai. Gets powers that takes away the horror aspect of a zombie outbreak. I don't care if he starts out weak he's still getting help and from what I've seen in reviews he's going to other worlds? Hard pass.

Didn't read this one. But from I've gathered from the reviews I'm glad I didn't. It's seems the writter doesn't care about feedback from people reading his story and only wants them for Patreon. Don't read this story folks go find one that's better.

The only mistake you made was not giving it a single star lol

I think it maybe for the best.

I'm not afraid to give a story a 1 star review. If the author made bad choices that ruined the flow of the story then it don't deserve 4 to 5 starts.

So do I give this story a read, or do I dodge it? The reviews for it are all over the place. My only issue is the typical Gamer System. I find when it's added to a story like HOTD; it takes away the horror aspect of a zombie apocalypse if your getting help from some system, even if the service is minor. I also see that after reading some reviews, you've made some choices with the Oc that people disagree with. If Saeko is the oc cousin, I honestly don't care about that. When people come to read a story of HOTD, they expect a Harem or a polygamy relationship. It seems you did that with Takashi to a degree but not for the OC. When I read a story about an Oc, I want it to be focused on them, not soul on the main cast of the story. If you made it were, Takashi is still pulling most of the strings, and the OC is only a helping hand. It's disappointing. Till I get told but a majority of people who have read the story give this fanfic a chance by explaining why it's good or by proving me wrong, I'm not even going to read the first chapter... There's not wrong with trying something different but don't take away the core fundamentals of what drew people into watch or reading a fictional world. And then you'll get 5 stars.

For being your first story it was surprisingly well made all things considered. Was it the longest I've seen of course not I've read many with longers ones but if you're able to write a prologue with such length, you have a future in the fanfiction business. And so far your version of the whole reincarnation is by far the best I've seen on Webnovel. I might be 10 months late be reguardless keep up the good work.

this isn't going to lead to a shota scenes. I hope it don't the story isn't bad but that will kill it for me if it does.

if only English was the Author natural language I'm sure there wouldn't be this many errors with a grammar.