Good, but can you introduce the characters of HP a little early? Also, can you make it a harem novel? Well all the best and make sure to add something that can give us goosebumps.

It was an excellent start. Looking forward to the next chapter. I believe it has good concept and would definitely be amongst the best. It has good plot and the character design is also awesome and highly recommend to join his patreon.

Quick Thoughts and Rating: 5 stars!