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HolesInTheWalls

HolesInTheWalls

Lv1
2021-04-12 đã tham giaAustralia
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  • HolesInTheWalls
    HolesInTheWalls3yr
    trả lời KaihinKoen

    I can't spoil too much but yes, there will be more of him. He is a frequent patron of the shop after all. :D

    "Putting it off just for a while eh?" Alfred looks at Sam, a cheeky grin visible on his bear-esque facial features. His beard barely hiding it.
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    HolesInTheWalls3yr
    trả lời KaihinKoen

    Tysm!

    Ch 2 Prologue 2: Long live Bayern!
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    HolesInTheWalls3yr
    trả lời KaihinKoen

    Thank you so much for your review, although it is a tad bit early into the story to be reviewing the content so far. I really, VERY much appreciate that you like it so far!

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  • HolesInTheWalls
    HolesInTheWalls3yr
    bình luận

    I think my writing needs more fluidity when adding information stemmed from another stimulus. e.g. Skyscrapers -> children of this gen. -> Sam's fav story I reckon this needs more easing into, it feels a bit rushed imo. But anyways hope youse enjoyed this 1.

    Ch 2 Prologue 2: Long live Bayern!
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    HolesInTheWalls3yr
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    Is it bad as the author to want to say this out loud? LONG LIVE BAYERN!! xD

    "LONG LIVE BAYERN!"
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    HolesInTheWalls3yr
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    Felt that this chapter was short, but anymore would just be unnecessary to the prologue. Still to make up for it, I'm in the middle of lengthening the second part of the prologue. I will try to produce 1000+ words in each chapter so I don't miss even smaller aspects important to the bigger picture of the story.

    Ch 1 Prologue 1: Bit busy today.
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