Hello! I'm CrossoverWorlds, a Youtuber, Music maker, artist, and writer! I'm from the U.S and I hope I stop coming across that pesky Creator's block.
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The writing is pretty good and I find the story medicore, but could you change it so the chapters are not named "Chapter 1: Chapter One" because it's just weird. Name them something like "Chapter 1: Hidden Feelings" instead, so it's not weird.
Why is it called chapter one twice
Why is it called chapter three twice??
Why is it called Chapter two twice? It's a little weird.
Ahyes. The godly time skip