wait what

Unnecessary things like what? you can't just give a vague review like this

Konoha has an internet?

Oh my God you wrote this piece if art??!!! Thank you!!!!!

I thought the bond was unspoken bruh

is that how it works where them mommas with big mommy milkers then?

I love this fic!!! please is this a translation? If yes what is the original name ? I would subscribe to your patreon but it's banned in my country so help me with the name please 🥹🥹🙏

what a waste of good mountain All those animals 😢

Nice story, good story Interesting developments really, really loved your team for second selection But I hate your mc He's just so unnecessarily full of himself It pisses me off Here's just one example In their very first game he was chosen to play as the foal keeper That dunce decided that he won't make any effort at all and instead chose to sit down by the post and let 2 goals roll in without doing anything about it Then when he started playing and realised that Oh! my opponents actually won't just sit back and let me score he became all tensed and worried that he might actually lose You know what would have stopped him from being in danger of losing? Actually doing his damn job as a keeper Not only that he decided to play Itoshi Rin and somehow expected to win, like he didn't read the manga or something, then got pissed when he lost, dumbass Bo planning for his weapons, just bull-rushing it Anyway he has little forward thinking in my opinion

it's been 4 months You didn't stick to your promise 🤧

Dude, they are devils Cheating being against the pride of devils? bruh...

are you ever ever going to do a Dragonball fic? please ?!!

Bro when is super Saiyan 5 showing up? the tournament's starting to drag ngl

thanks for the chapter