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well that is how the merchants traveled and the rulers of the lands so for official meetings it makes sense

if nico thinks that's his mom maybe add like 5 years or more to the 18 or change it to big sister maybe 🤔

long not pregnant

most readers won't know kami means god as that is a word that doesn't really translate well to other languages. I only know as I love dragon ball z. also for the name you have to flip it for English so Rosan D. portgas. love the Novel so far though.

isn't the demonic form supposed to make the monster feel no pain?

they forgot they can recall their beast lol

lord level not monarch

cousin not nephew

crimson flash instead of flash of blood sounds better

Just a tip. constantly saying fat man to describe the character and not his name makes him seem like an NPC. It takes away from any character development he might have or get the same for any characters in the future if you do something similar