Interesting story and hooks. Some small grammar mistakes but well written none the less. Not an ordinary romance and not everyone will like it. But if you want to read something new this book is for you.

She should ask for a pay slip and bank statements

Like the name

This guy will change that really soon I hope

I don't like parents interfering

Slow burn love story. Well written, with some minor issues. All the thoughts were clear and the story easy to follow. I also didn't like the ML and the confusion. But I'm sure they will sort it out eventually. :( The fact that you have a POV for both saved the day. Overall it was a great start.

Very well written story with very little mistakes. I liked the slice of life aspect... if you were in a magical world with fairies elves and orcs... Enjoyed reading about Astoria and everything she went through. The story building is well written and easily imagined. Will love to see what she get's up to.

Jamal