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My only problem with the story are the info dumpings. Heard this got better after Chapter 50 or something like that so I'm a bit excited to finish this novel

This is a review after chapter 69 Like most of the people had already said in the review. Searching for Smut found a gold instead. The story development, The writing, the update are all good. Not to mention R-18 scenes are god tier 👌 I do have a slight problem with protagonist but it wasn't really jarring for me to stop this story and he honestly one of the best protag in the Harem Genre. I love this story wkwkwkwkwkw

keep a good work 👍

Review after chapter 169 - Yes my fav number. Nothing much to say about this story but the early 20 chapters are kind of painful for me to read. Not bad but the inconsistency in early chapters is killing me. It still have some inconsistency but wasn't as bad as before Max is honestly pretty annoying but he is fine compared to most of the Harem Protagonist on this site. For the heroines they are good, so I have nothing to criticize about em. Update Stability, It is hella good, consistent and pretty hard for me to catch up. World Building is fine, although it will be more helpful if you goes into more detail about the world. For Grammar, I don't know about this cause English also isn't my first language so It is good enough for me to read and enjoy.

Nice title

SEGGS

imagine can write this good, can't be me

I think just because he is a bounty hunter doesn't mean he is not a coward, as far as I read MC is not coward when it come to fighting but he is a coward when it come to making a decision

each of their own, I'm still enjoying this series and desperately wish that this story won't go on the same route as ship of lust which is by far the worst One Piece fanfic in this platform.

It necessary for drama, I think? For what I read through the chapters it's seem like the author enjoy writing drama. Her drama writing is actually quite decent. Let's just hope that she will make a closure for Luke's personality drama before the next 5 chapters.