Thank you for the nice review

Yes it is.

The story will unfold as Barbara starts her revenge. Many secrets about her real identity will be revealed later on.

About Aurora or Barbara?

sorry for being late to review your novel.

The writing is good. It is just the beginning but the premise is good and has suspense. Cleo's backstory needs to be stronger. Waiting for the work to update more. All the bast.

Intriguing opening chapter

The story was a fun read. Although it had only a few chapters, the premise is there so there must be many exciting things to read. The characters were nicely crafted.

The writing is good and the chapters are long!!!!!!! (I hope I can do that too.) The characters are nicely crafted and their images are cute too. Nice work. Just the first chapters were too packed with information that made it hard to understand the whole system.

keep the good work!

The writing is good and smooth. The story is a bit confusing. The second and third prologues are long and somehow add to my confusion. But when the story begins, things become clearer. The world background needs to be more explained. It is a multi-realm background and should be taken one by one to be understandable for readers. At first, many characters do many things in many places. Try to focus on the MC from the beginning and let her discover the realms by herself. The first prologue is a good start, but if the first chapter began with Luna, maybe it would be simpler and easier because I really had a hard time tracking the story. All the best.

Why did he go by himself? he could have ordered someone else to go.

There were two babies in the name of Luna?

So Nakul spent 40 years to do his task and still trying to?

Intriguing opening chapter

Who is Nala?

Nice poem

Nice opening chapter

The story is fun to read. The writing quality is good, smooth and detailed. The Fl's personality is likable and the other characters too. good work.

you are totally right