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Such cheap words.. i mean.. is there anyone who takes this novel seriously? The whole scene feels so artificial and poorly written…

This story had no emotional value anyway. Eliminating a char just for single FL is bullshet anyway

This cheap drama at the end was the worst possible piece of trash i have read lately. Why is this novel such a cheap piece of trash? Author should really start reading something in his life, maybe he can improve his skills. This is really some of the most pathetic writing i have read lately.

Will seraphina be in harem? I see her as supporting char instead of lead like the other 2

Funny how an entire major realm was shaved off… Last time he broke through from Peak Sacred realm to initial Sacred realm lol… Instead if Great Sacred realm, he is still in Sacred realm… This makes even me want to stop reading the novel since it seems like a joke

So they don’t believe in his ability. Both are at 7th realm, and they still see Mc as inferior.. Such trash women. Only Liu Qingxian is good. Rest are worthless women

Yeah man… such dragged out trash.. really braindead trash novel. Author is retarded

Long dropped it bruh… It was just too dumb of a novel.. and at the point i stopped, they were about to spend 100 chaps just to reach the capital, showing several chaps of every fight against random mobs on the street as if that was fun or something.. Don’t waste your time, author lacks creativity and intelligence.

You write with your eyes on the word count i swear… dragging out every single paragraph with unnecessary words… While your novel is decent, when will you improve on that annoying writing style of yours that goes around in circles and repeats every single description every single paragraph? Can you make it a little bit easier on us readers who have to skim through multiple chapters just to get to the point in a conversation? We’re all paying money here bruh…

Yep. Btw, try to reread your chaps after writing. I saw many typos here and there, which show the rush in writing. There are many free tools to check spelling, and that’s all you need. Free grammarly can also help you if you miss some words here and there. Just some suggestions cause you write well, and your style is authentic, but you type with your toes xD