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ZeroSerei

ZeroSerei

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2021-03-09 đã tham giaPhilippines
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  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    trả lời Wateristubeg

    Thanks

    Ch 1 Prologue: In The Beginning
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    The Epic Of Fire: A Battle of Beliefs
    Kỳ huyễn · SereiZero
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    First chap is a bit confusing with the narration, but it's pretty good apart from those issues

    Chương này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    The Crystals
    Kỳ huyễn · PrinceofLightning
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    Furara, there is a time to do free hand and a time to use a staff to obliterate a demon general. Trust Hanjiro for once

    “ No! I don’t want to abandon my freehand magic to staff just because of this.”
    altalt
    Here I Am In This RPG World
    Huyền huyễn · Haroldtigre
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  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    let me hand you a power stone

    Ch -1 Prologue: Looks like I got Scammed?
    altalt
    My Organic Life Experience of Living with a Plant Girl
    Kỳ huyễn · Dualpen
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    How did you do the italics

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    My Organic Life Experience of Living with a Plant Girl
    Kỳ huyễn · Dualpen
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    Furara is adorable AAAAAAAA

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    Here I Am In This RPG World
    Huyền huyễn · Haroldtigre
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    "Yeah I'm hungry, what are we having for lunch?" Answer: You Two

    You two…..
    altalt
    Here I Am In This RPG World
    Huyền huyễn · Haroldtigre
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    Need more of Furara, especially her breaking out of those robes.

    Ch 3 Save Log 2: A Cat Shall Stalk Me For Nothing
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    Here I Am In This RPG World
    Huyền huyễn · Haroldtigre
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei2yr
    bình luận

    I would prefer if you added spaces in between dialogue for easier reading but all in all, this is pretty decent man!

    Ch 2 First Day
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    Just happened
    Thành thị · Zenande
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  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    trả lời Rayene_Blue

    it isn't a grammar error, don't worry! it's something wrong with my head for even imagining it given the context

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior
    Thành thị · Rayene_Blue
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    Either this sounds wrong or I'm just really really messed up

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior
    Thành thị · Rayene_Blue
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    I will attempt to be the first comment in this chapter because I can : ) also, I think this chapter is great! I can see why those reads poured thanks to all that quality

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior
    Thành thị · Rayene_Blue
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  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    trả lời Ferjenni

    Anytime madame, was a good read after all and it deserves praise :)

    altalt
    Remember 1999
    Thành thị · Ferjenni
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
     công bố

    Funny, lighthearted, and enjoyable. Man this book hits different, but to be honest it has a lot of things it has to improve on like its grammar and the way it presents itself. The narration itself and the way the narrative is presented was good with the switching perspectives, but I don't think replaying the same scene serves the purpose that well... not like I could say much about that in my book, but all in all this has been a pretty stellar experience

    altalt
    THE SECRETARY
    Thành thị · Precious_Onwe
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    who killed Tyre?? wait who was Tyre?????

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    THE SECRETARY
    Thành thị · Precious_Onwe
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    I love how she fails to insult mid-sentence

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    THE SECRETARY
    Thành thị · Precious_Onwe
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    this could have been shown through their rooms, but I guess this does serve it's purpose

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    THE SECRETARY
    Thành thị · Precious_Onwe
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  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
     công bố

    I will be direct to the point here... I see the effort, but readers, where were you? Seriously though, this book deserves way more reads than it should have. It's light, crisp, and good. While it isn't quite original as other concepts or aspects, the way it is presented, the manner of characters bouncing off each other is just a nice taste. This thing is the Pringles of story writing so where you guys at?

    altalt
    Remember 1999
    Thành thị · Ferjenni
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    slick, real slick here

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    altalt
    Remember 1999
    Thành thị · Ferjenni
    detail
  • ZeroSerei
    ZeroSerei3yr
    bình luận

    Jin Ae sounds like a person I'm gonna like for real. this made me wonder if I would've been more like the male lead had I taken psychology instead

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Forgotten
    altalt
    Remember 1999
    Thành thị · Ferjenni
    detail