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forced plot, nothing makes sense anymore, now I know why so many people give it 2 stars oh and stop making the main character such a crybaby and immature child because he just doesn't want to inherit the kingdom or something, since he has already named himself the king of magic, everyone knows where this is all heading.

I see that after these chapters we can only expect that they will reconcile again, so I practically see no reason to fight. Why? Besides, in 90% of fics no one is friends with Edward, so apart from the fact that his face is bruised, practically nothing happens here, so I don't understand why he has #dark in his tags

so something will finally happen or as usual, nothing because Bella is a HEROINE AND YOU CAN'T TOUCH THE HEROINE WITH EVEN A FINGER BECAUSE SHE IS A HEROINE

I see that he is turning into another hashirame... fruit here, fruit there, soon there will be an alliance with iwagakure and they will also get... bravo, hypocrite, first you insult hashirame and then you do the same

he finally brought the Ferrari, I've been waiting for it for a long time XD I want to see her reactions haha

nothing has changed since the beginning, the hero is constantly trampled and weak, if you have masochistic tendencies, this story is for you

another piece of trash who can't stand up to his mother and do what he wants? disgusting... and maybe for a change you will finally object once and argue a bit because I don't see the logic in it at the moment. Recently, some crazy girl from his class threatened him and I can be more than sure that if he were to do something to her in front of his mother, she would also slap him on the cheek and tell him not to...