You need to finish it! I want more! I kinda like how heath just showed up and destroyed the main character like damn he said **** your shit. Also the way you describe her lips and the blood sucking. Like I want that to happen to me now lol. Love how sweet and loyal ash is. Jacklyn is okay. To me she's just there to make the other characters look better in a sense besides being scarletts bestie. Also tate and manson. I like how it felt like boss levels in a game there. And the eye for an eye thing was so cute. Also in a street fight piercing pulling is very common. I wish there was more to the combat. You make them sound like they are badass but they don't necessarily fight like it. There's the animalistic nature to the fights that is nice and they seem beautiful and dirty at the same time. But if they trained or taught them to fight like wouldn't there be a little bit of mix Marshall arts?