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thank you i will definitely attempt to incorporate this but it may not make it into this novel since it isnt my main novel as seen by my inactivity on it.

can you tell me what is wrong with it so i know what kind of text style to go for

mc is a child and only has an interest in ranni so im sorry to say but if youre looking for a harem or romance with other characters this may not be the book for you.

I will NOT drop you may just have to wait some time every now and then.

I know I'm going off what I can remember from my first playthrough since I don't have regular access to the game so that's causing the pacing issue might redo the chapters to get some better pacing.

I don't have a set schedule I just write whenever I can but recently I haven't really had the time to write but more will be posted when I get the chance

I got a good plan for making ranni fleshy don't worry and I'm kinda on the fence with making this one eventually a lemon I feel like it will reduce viewer count but I just might do it I look forward to seeing you comment more and thank you for taking interest.

100% he will and the ending of the game isn't gonna be the ending of the story.

for juggernaut Eivrinti and the bey bey used by jalen yes

indeed i have just published it