YATOOO

You can live and thrive by just telling the truth, but you can't live by just telling lies, I can imagine a million scenarios where you will die because you can't tell the truth.

This is absolute stupidity, if you know that Sani will survive, why the hell would she interfere with the plot and risk going off track and possibly dying?

Isn't Shisui supposed to oppose Fugaku's words and defend Danzo to prevent a civil war? I mean, he threw himself off the cliff precisely to stop this scenario from happening!

Called it! You’re never gonna finish the first volume at this rate. You keep piling on new twists and complications every Three chapters, and you’re overusing mystery to the point where it loses its charm. If you’re rewriting, my advice? Keep things simple and cut down on unnecessary perspectives. Drop hints and unanswered questions subtly here and there, but don’t go overboard. Focus on building a solid, cohesive foundation first once that’s in place, you can expand naturally. Keep everything filtered through the main character’s perspective, whether they’re right or dead wrong. Then, when the time’s right, hit ’em with a killer plot twist to wrap up the volume. And for the love of God, don’t make things harder on yourself than they need to be. Best of luck! (English is not my first language)

You’ve got to be fucking kidding me! As if you don’t already have enough shit to deal with ،William and his mysterious crap, that girl and whatever the hell is going on with her, time travel bullshit, and now Sani is backing off too? with just one chapter every few weeks? Yeah, at this rate, you’re never get to the eighth volume.. Hell, you won’t even get through the first damn volume!.

TFTC ♥️

why are you gay?

TFTC = thanks for the Chapter.

No, no... The saint is off-limits! Return her sweets immediately, or else...I will look for you, I will find you, and I will kill you.