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MajimaMunancho241dbình luậnInside the dark room, Haley was lying down seductively on the bed. "Hello Batman. I've been expecting you." She whispered before she beckoned him to come near with her finger.- MajimaMunancho242dbình luậnCh 8 Cake and Cooking
- MajimaMunancho243dtrả lời blankbrokencanvasCh 28 Grandpas crush
- MajimaMunancho244dbình luận
You killed them off quite quick. Majority of people seem to kill off the mc's parents in these kind of fics. I do have a question though what will happen to paige now? Will she make a future appearance? I'm just assuming you killed them off to get the mc to stay close to the dunphy's
Ch 4 Four(no ideas) - MajimaMunancho246dbình luậnCh 25 Pinky promise?
- MajimaMunancho246dtrả lời blankbrokencanvasCh 50 A Concerned Mentor
- MajimaMunancho247dtrả lời Isekailogy
mate read Amalgum - Lockhearts folly on fanfic net its written by tkepner. this guy just took his work and chopped it up and is making $90 a month. Theres too many people stealing fics and charging people to read more when this story has already been completed
Ch 37 Gilderoy's Grand Scheme - MajimaMunancho247dbình luậnCh 50 A Concerned Mentor
- MajimaMunancho247dtrả lời Chaos_Azatoth
check meddling giant by cloud9stories on fanfiction net, he's the original author he has a webnovel account that is cloudninestories where he has this posted, but a few chapters behind his upload on fanfiction net. This guy has just stolen the original story and is cutting it down and charging people like he wrote it himself.
Ch 86 Harry Potter : Chapter 85: Beyond III - MajimaMunancho2412dbình luậnCh 3 Chapter 3: Dinner and Chaos
- MajimaMunancho2422dcông bố
You sir are stealing Cloud9stories Meddling Giant and are charging people to read ahead on your patreon where you are not the original author if any readers want to read from the original author please check out cloud9stories on fanfiction net or his story on webnovel where you'll find it way ahead of this one. I have a feeling the author will delete this to hide his actions https://www.webnovel.com/book/meddling-giant_25295498805484505 (the original author)
- MajimaMunancho241mthbình luận
ngl feels like you've rushed it a bit. I mean so far he's grown up drinking at the age of 11 and looks 18. I know he has templates but it seems like he has no specific reason to be doing this at his age, especially given his background. Has me concerned with what next extreme will happen for instance if he were to have a hannibal lecter template would he be a cannibal?
Ch 5 Going on a journey - MajimaMunancho242mthbình luận"Who knows , maybe sheer dumb luck might be my special skill." *chuckle*
- MajimaMunancho242mthbình luận"Not California, just our district." Phil corrected me and said disappointedly, "I still can't beat out Esther Rosenblatt by a large margin. Alright. We will go to West Hollywood."
- MajimaMunancho242mthbình luận"I should not have told that should I?" I could hear Phil muttering but that's something I need to keep aside for now.
- MajimaMunancho242mthbình luậnCh 100 Chapter 100: The Avengers
- MajimaMunancho242mthbình luậnCh 9 Rajesh’s encounter
- MajimaMunancho242mthbình luận
I'm not sure how I'm feeling about this. So now he has possibly killed someone?
We see Chuck standing holding an umbrella looking towards a particular direction with an expression of disbelief . Panning to the direction we see Noah walking towards Chuck soaked in blood... - MajimaMunancho242mthcông bố
I don't know if it's just me, but I found it hard to follow. Too many crossovers and not clear with timeskips, I've been reading each chapter as a mini story arc with timeskips missing a chunk of interaction between characters. I do believe this fic has a good start, but wavers as more and more characters are introduced as each chapter passes. The main character for me is a bit much, I think he has too much going on as he changes rapidly, not sure if it reads better in Spanish. Wish you all the best with this story!