Josden

It smells like fanfic wat pad here. On Webnovel no one kisses to specify if/oc. It's simpler here, freer no need to put it on.

Nope without too much spoilers, I planned to make other characters from tales appear but not the 5 original guardians (except Jack Frost of course)

This is the punctuation used in France to signal the beginning of a conversation. "" is to show the different dialogues I used it reflexively

So no one makes the remark so I'm going to do it. Changing your point of view so often is disturbing, it makes the reading indigestible and complicated to follow. If you decide to write from a point of view, stick to that point of view or through a strong marking and a complete scene change, otherwise at the end if you don't understand what's going on. Also, it helps you develop your scene and your script if you do it this way. Even if it seems simpler and easier, for the reader, this is not the case at all.

What's the point of writing a story if you have two ex machina that settles all situations for the hero. The Ancient One is not all-powerful or omniscient, otherwise all the plots of Phase 2 would have no reason to exist. I want to write a story with a protagonist who settles his own threats, or even who asks for help, but not a lazy person who watches and sees things happen without doing anything. In addition, each hero in Marvel has a threat level that he faces on a regular basis.

You take this photo and you age it by 10 years (about 55 years in my story)

Several of you have made this remark. Yes, it was recorded on video, but only children can see it. The Shield, the media, and Hydra took this information into account because it was relevant and explained why there were blizzards and frost attacks.

I know very well but it's just a cheat code, I want him to solve his own problems, especially since in the end it is not in the remit of The Elder to take care of this kind of small problem. You don't see her tackling every invasion or every time a demon, powerful or not, enters the earth in the comics

Of course not, on the other hand an AI can browse forums where parents complain about nightmares, look for solutions from other parents. For example, when a traumatic event takes place in a school, there is an increase in online searches on this kind of subject. That's what JARVIS has to look for and find.