ArmedBaton

Don't comment a lot but you've struck gold with a good concept for a story . Ignore the really negative comments man, been a fun read.

Great quality writing compared to other stories looking forward to seeing more. Thanks ................................................................................................................................................................

Only concern is pikes in mountains terrain tends to be folly. I would recommend a flexible infantry unit, that can support and envelop any opposition. Hammer and anvil, but I suppose that’s what the Hussars are for so you choice tbh

Worth the wait. Good luck

Sounds good mate, have a good holiday

Can’t lie not even disappointed it was a good read and I enjoyed it. If your not enjoying writing it then it’s fair enough to step away from it. Look forward to any other work you do in the future. Or this series if it continues in the future.

Aye

Personally I think there should be a time skip as character development only goes so far being so young. You could do a short summery on what he does during the time gone. Don’t know end of the day it’s your story do what your comfortable with

Updates are a bit slow, but everyone has their personal life so np, good quality as well look forward to seeing more in the future. Good luck author👍

Took the word out of my mouth at the end when the next one then bloody tease