anonymus000

when you said the part with the door i imediatley trought at how ppl look at the animals from the zoo. I think my brain stopped working

better said a dumb death eater like Peter I-don't-know-how-to-spell-it (really, i forgot how to spell it)

yes, why not. You practically asked for it

that guy is just like : Congrats, you are now dead! Now what?

i love that he just got hit by a truck and than he's like : yo, that did not feel great

simply me

so i guess James dies and you can't continue writing? I recommend you to read Bloody Mary by Saphire_Luna

really intresting, but i would like it to have more chapters. I want to know what happens next there. You should ceck Saphire_Luna's story also called Bloody Mary, mabye you'll get inspiration (aproved by her)

i think she is going to run from the wedding , no? really intresting and i am pretty shure some small details will make sense later. Waiting for the next few chapters [img=recommend]