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This is an enjoyable read that I don't understand why people hate so much. The writing at the begining was a little rough but the way the story has progressed since then has been fantastic. The only warning I can give is that if you prefer the mc to have to work for his knowledge or skills this isn't the novel for you, otherwise I look forward to reading each new chapter.
There will always be people who will complain about what you write, why listen to them when you have others that really enjoy your work. Keep going till you finish or no longer want to write but never let others dictate what you do.
You can't block the killing curse with magic under normal circumstances, you have to conjure a physical object to block the curse. The 2 known exceptions was sacrificial magic from Lily Potter to save Harry and at Tom Sr grave when Voldemort and Harry's wand syncronized as brother wands leading to the intermingling and blocking of magic.
I'm not expecting him to start at the top, but I am dissapointed that you went for a trope/ the easy way through this when you could have had his body continue to repair itself and have his lineage deny the devil pieces at the cost of delaying/ nerfing any abilities it may have provided. This could have been used to have Rias gain a huge intrest in him and maybe even act as if she saved him and then try to create a mutually benificiary relationship at first. Instead it is the typical 'you aren't strong enough so now choose to either die or become my slave and while I say and think that I treat you well I will actually neglect you as I try to fix my own issue before even thinking about yours.' situation that most are bored of by now. I am not even really upset about that I am more upset because I thought I would get to see another DXD mc who isn't a devil. Still going to try though since I know you won't rewrite your plot just because of a rando on the internet.
Most wizarding kids are from 'pure' blood families, including potentially Cedric, most just aren't from the Sacred 28. The Abbot family is part of the Sacred 28 and Hannah Abbot will be sorted into Hufflepuff next year, and while called blood traitors the Weasly family are also still a pure blood family of the Sacred 28. Fawley is another Sacred 28 pure blood family that tends to be sorted into Hufflepuff.
doesn't matter how many OCs are introduced if they are dead in the end so don't worry about it.
There is only one Ying Yang beast on each planet so good luck.
It should hopefully only be for the first few soul rings when the difference in strengh isn't that large.
Miki or Mika could also be used as endering and slightly embarassing nickname for Mikeal.
I think this look is much better. The muted colors and half mask really work for the more anti-hero or villian like look.
Ra is a good choice as he is one of relativly few God Kings of said divinity. I can only think of 2, and Ameturasu is the other.
This is supposed to be War God though, right?
If Qin Xiao doesn't kill at least a 90,000 year beast for this mission I will be upset. If he kills a 100,000 year beast and it fuses with his current rings that would be a great boost to the average ages of his rings.
I think that it means that it cost 25 atribute points to break his bodies natrual limit and increase his stat beyond 50.
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