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The story got me hooked right away, I am a sucker for isekai genre, having high hope that this will be interesting. It may be generic but all the characters are likeable, looking forward to the world building and thrilling adventures ahead.
Why both Divine and Conceptors are represented by lotus flower? Is there backstory for this? Is Conceptors actually a branch from Divine?
Isn't it suppose to be Wisteria fixing this?
thank you for spotting it :) din't notice the "and" typo will fix it now
thank you. I was planning on concluding all the battles in one chapter but before I knew it I already reach my self target average word count. now the battle is split across two chapters (=__=|||) Please let me know if you prefer a longer chapter or consistent chapter length.
Thank you for enjoying my work, I hope this gives you something to look forward every Monday. :D
I see... Sentence structure and grammar, my greatest enemy. XD
Thank you for your input. The backstory is explained in the next two paragraphs, I separate it to 3 paragraphs because the paragraph is so long >_< Should I combine them for easier reading?
Thank you for the review. I would be happy if you can point out those paragraphs. Your comments will help improve others reading experience.
Thank you. please look forward to chap 3 when it comes out