loved the chapter reading the title of it though the only thought in my mind was this person for some reason

I generally don't try to post reviews when there's not many chapters but the 2 I've seen so far are great (along with me wanting to encourage the author to continue the story/not drop it). Because of the lack of chapters I cannot put much in the review however the writing quality and grammar are great, I enjoy the main character's personality (so far he seems to be more on the gentlemanly humorous kind that also brings up other's lack of common sense), and I love the world of DC so that's a plus. The only bad things I can say about this is how short the chapters are, lack of chapters, and the chances this might be dropped based off of the author's other fanfics However that doesn't take away from this fanfic as even though the chapters are short they are of great quality and I wouldn't want the author to get burnout by making them write more per chapter. It's a newly made fanfic so it makes sense that it'll take a while for the chapters to reach a stockpile point and patience is needed for that to happen. As for the chance of dropping there's not much that can be done besides supporting/encouraging the author to continue and hope they don't get burnout Overall it's a great fanfic that I would recommend reading (though maybe you might wanna stockpile the chapters some)

I took a break from this and decided to come back to read it getting to chapter 99 With knowledge of how the unedited chapters are I'll try to talk about them The unedited chapters are readable however there are consistent mistakes throughout the chapters especially with numbers and names (I haven't seen any cases of wrong genders though) some numbers for Tony Stark's stocks are heavily inflated (what was 20 billion was mistranslated to 200 billion increasing to 500 billion instead of 50 billion) and while this doesn't take away much in the story it is still jarring to read. The name issue is the same with quite a few of the names being Hank Pym ( and saying Obadiah attended an event after his death ) Besides that the majority of the quality is pretty much the same (imo) however if you do not like translated fanfics as any and all mistakes no matter how minor (or would be ignored if it wasn't a translated fanfic) would obviously make you see it in a poor light and hate on it

not the Disney live action movies

even if that is the case they live 10x longer than us (with more enhanced bodies if we consider the anime) so overall it balances out

I'd laugh if it was a tribute 1 of your monsters to pop an enemy monster (though maybe it'll be pop a non effect monster)

obviously because this is looker

that wouldn't make sense lol

i believe there should be more hidden quests and objectives for this to increase (like if Giovanni was captured/the entirety of team rocket was disbanded)

since it's 6942 you can just add .0 at the end without it affecting anything making it 6942.0

At that point though it wouldn't matter you're hard resetted now so no more thinking about that soul anymore For all we know the MC could've been hard resetted a few times before and it still wouldn't matter

1. there can be a chance where a strategy involves not dodging and the trainer is conveying that to their pokemon (or maybe a specific type of dodge like using a move or in a direction can be beneficial for them) 2. This is a new trainer so unless they have a pokemon with lots of experience in the wild they generally don't start training their pokemon to battle on their own yet

I think you mean jelly donuts