Karen_S_Sergent

Will her wings come back?

Calhoun wanted to know about a antidote for James. Nice that he asked. Still each one of them are now different beings and Madeline hasnt fully come out to be herself yet! Can a angel and a demon vampire mix? What happens next will be a eye opener for sure!

What is the secret that Maddies grandparents know? The breaking glass. They also wanted to know if Calhoun knew something. That he was different? Who will find Markus in the prison or will he get bitten? So much intrigue.

And you have a lot of talent as a writer. I enjoy reading again.

Your writing is very good. I have enjoyed your stories. Others leave me bored after awhile. If you ever need a editor let me know not saying your writing needs a lot of editing but i have found just a few areas. I guess my fault because I use to write years ago and may start again.

Im a teacher. I’ve enjoyed your book but at first it needed to be edited. Also chapters are short. Story seems to drag on to a degree. Overall, you do have talent. Keep working hard and you will be a best seller one day.

I’ve read the last chapter that you have written. when will you be adding more chapters?

I think Elizabeth with become a traitor.

Bad feeling

Surprise when they find out leon’s fleet knows of their plans