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Btw it's hilarious XD

The main character is very unique and fun to follow along with. The story's pace and writing quality are both top-notch love it! The author has established the world background quite well as well.

Love the Harry Potter element, it adds spice to this story. I can't wait for more updates on this amazing piece. You did a great job with the pace of the story development even though it only has 8 chapters.

This has a very interesting world that I can see develop into something big. The usage of short syntax was a bit too often in the first chapter but it did succeed in building the suspense. Other than that it's fabulous, can't wait for future updates!

The story development is very well-paced. The medical element embedded adds to the mysteriousness of the story. I can't wait for what is about to happen in future chapters!

Thank you for your review I will work hard on that!

Thank you for the review and constructive critisim will work harder on that!

Thank you so much for the review I will do my best to improve!

You have an amazing MC who is very unique and a strong character. Your writing quality is very nice and story development is steady. Keep up with the hard work!

I have not much to say, this was amazing, absolutely breathtaking novel. The prologue with a small play on mind was a great introduction that really hooked me in!