P_Karnage

question my friend the author. Are you truly going to add harem to an incredible and nostalgic and innocent childhood anime ?

Excellent writing. The quality is far better than what I would expect of web novel. The characters seem pretty fleshed out. I just hope that the fully tragic arc of both the fl and ml won't drag on too long cause they're both sweethearts especially the fl. All in all, great writing. Its a story that I truly want to keep reading !

Not dumb per say. It's just that the MC feels erratic. Maybe I missed something but his behaviour doesn't seem to be fueled by some greater reason. Plus he is devolving into exactly the type of power hungry and manipulative person with no limits that I dislike reading about. Not really criticizing the author or anything. ✌️

Yikes. I mean I thought it was going to go this way after seeing the MC's not so bright mentality. But sheesh that's a disappointing turn for the MC's personality. I liked the book at the start but it's become a bit of a chore to read. Sorry! And good luck for the remainder of the book.

This review is not to undermine the book or anything just my real opinion. This book is completely toxic. Literally everyone is toxic in it. The bullies, the friends, the MC hell even the dad. Plus I don't get the comments about how its a new concept cuz its pretty much the same as all the other books. From the plot line to the background even to the damn powers. However that is not what I would condemn as I like power fantasies. My problem with this book is the subpar writing quality and the toxicity and shallowness of every character. They are like cardboard cutouts of the dumbest people in a cultivation novel. Tbh only these two things bother me. The cliched aspect of the book( basic power fantasy, power extraction, bullied MC, slightly forced plot, the usual everyone has a crush on one girl in the academy and weird edgy creep MC) don't bother me at all, just the two aforementioned things. However I guess one positive of this book would be that the flow and pacing is pretty good.

+1

The thing is when a well written fic suddenly turns towards tragedy it's annoying for fanfic readers who were expecting a generic feel good fanfic. It just depends on you and your target audience I guess. I for one was looking for that and if it goes down again I might stop reading simply because it's not what I was searching for. It's nothing against you as an author 😉

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH a Toriko rip off!!!!!!!!!

I hope I never know what that sounds like.