Zaidzehn

it seems some reviewers have the patience of a toddler. yes the story is pretty slow. if you consider it story wise. but seeing as how hundreds of years have passed already in just 33 chapters it's pretty fast . i like the worldbuilding and background information. it's fun. all in all i like it and can't wait to read more.

it's a good story, but it's not this author's, it's a straight-up word-for-word copy of Reincarnation game book one from ffnet. disapointing.

for Max

The war started in 1970, Tom started calling his followers death eaters before even that but they weren't publically known, only people like Dumbledore knew about it before 1970, But now in the yr 1971 in which the marauders joined as first years, the war has been going on for a year, so they would know about it.

lighting is all well and good but have you ever PRAISED THE SUN

This is reaching isekai protagonist level of denseness.

it's the Snoop G O double D

Hestia do be bestia

slightly more paragraph breaks and include more spaces between changes from thoughts to spoken words but those are mere aesthetic changes, if you wish to improve your quality of the writing then i suggest you read more while trying to write some unrelated stuff in thier styles and then continue in your style, you'll notice you seem to have picked up some habits that you personally do not mind from a lot of the authors you emulated. i personally started with emulating the works of Charles Dickens and I've been told that my writing had become overly verbose after that. other than that my friend, practice, practice and practice.

it is of no concern to me. to do so or not do so is your own prerogative.