kickyx

it was cringe

i feel like you may have a brain cell deficit

This novel is simply so cringe that it's hard to read. First of all, the entire novel is ENGLISH YET THE AUTHOR MAKES A CHARACTER SAY "Chotto-Matte" isntead of "Wait a second" for absolutely no reason. It makes no sense, and I know its meant to be "funny" or sosmething but it just isnt, its extremly awkward and hard to read. Now, that isnt even the worst part. The worst part is the author describing a 10 year old girl's chest and how the MC touched it... it's so hard to read... Conclusion: This novel is extremely cringe and hard to read, I don't really like it because its not my style, but some people may like it.

can you add more chapters here so the ddifference with patreon isnt so huge? you only have 7 patreons anyway so pls.. ;-; (u can alsos just update more frequently)

Not only did you use the wrong form of miss but you also said “bozo”, definitely 12 💀

I am convinced you’re 12 years old or something… i cba to argue with you

why does the world government matter? since when do authors have to be dangerous??? Oda created the world Rob is living in right now, Oda created the manga he is sending out, Rob is nothing more than something akin to a translator. (Redraw / Typesetting / Distributing)

didnt expect someone else to understand fome (means boring)

“rob knows he’s stealing” your comment is contradicting itself. If he knows he’s stealing then he isn’t considered an author at all but rather a plagiarist, at best a publisher. Also, does it matter thst no one would know who Oda is? The answer is that it doesn’t. Just because someone isn’t known doesn’t change who made the original.

the “something else” that’s going on is ignorant writing that copies every other chinese novel