Surthum

Lv13

Always a bit bored.

2021-01-06 đã tham giaGlobal

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Surthum6 months ago
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Daeron is like 13 here lol
"That she does," his prince replied. "Yet it will be good for Baelor to marry her instead, I think. Daena will be good for my brother, and hopefully he can temper her wilder side with his newfound ways. I know father and uncle have a small list of potential queens for me, but until then, Oly, only you shall share my bed… when possible."
Dread Our Wrath (ASOIAF SI)
Diễn sinh tác phẩm · TheOneThatRead
Surthum6 months ago
bình luận
isn't he 13? lol
Curled up beside the one who held his heart, he softly smiled. "When are you to marry?" he asked. They had not spoken of it before, but after such a… nice time together, basking in the glow, it would not hurt to talk of such things, right?
Dread Our Wrath (ASOIAF SI)
Diễn sinh tác phẩm · TheOneThatRead
Surthum2 years ago
bình luận
a werewolf
Though among the students, someone was much more reactive than everyone. It was Martina Valentino. She was looking at Umbridge with a frown, as if she was surprised and disgusted by her presence.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Tranh châm biếm · Snollygoster
Surthum2 years ago
bình luận
Why is there such disparity between verbal tenses? Like, sometimes you use the present tense and sometimes the past tense. It's confusing. I believe your story would be way better if you used the tenses correctly. 🤩
Right now, the house was empty except for Creature, the house elf. Nymphadora was off to her Auror training and Bella comes late.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Tranh châm biếm · Snollygoster
Surthum2 years ago
bình luận
Why do you write in present tense and then change it to past?? It's confusing
For now, the restricted Section didn't matter to Matthew. The public part of the library contained more than enough books for the next year. After all, unlike in Warlock of the Magnus World, there was no method to download the knowledge directly. He needs to read every book fully to add the knowledge into his database. Unlike the other students, he just needs to read them once, and with the help of the AI Chip, he comprehends the whole book word for word.
Magus of the Wizarding World
Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Arrowinmyknee
Surthum2 years ago
bình luận
tropey, tropeeey
When she's around her guildmates, she's always cold and has a fierce aura surrounding her, making her generally unapproachable.
Void Evolution System
Kỳ huyễn · Crocs_is_Dead
Surthum2 years ago
trả lời Ms_Magician
I disagree
Okay, I guess not all white people have big boobs…
Scholar's Advanced Technological System
Thành thị · Morning Star LL
Surthum2 years ago
bình luận
Please, author, bear in mind that punctuation is highly recommended and appreciated. 😳
"Good morning, it is with great regret that we notify you that Arthur Miller, winner of the Nobel Prize in Medicine and Physics for creating a cure for cancer and a machine capable of eliminating nuclear radiation, Arthur died this Saturday, at approximately 19:00 pm , for respiratory complications after an attack on Thursday, when his car was stopped while he was leaving home, he was shot and a bullet pierced his lung, Arthur will never be forgotten, as he is a person who has never sought profit. patented his creations, and publicly exposed his inventions for all to enjoy, my condolences and may God comfort the hearts of all family and friends and may Arthur rest in peace with the angels, which is where he belongs.
Game Of Thrones: House Pendragon
Ti vi · zLucasH
Surthum2 years ago
công bố
I find the present tense very annoying in this story. I'm sorry. But that's how it is. I believe this fic could have a quality upgrade if that changed. Of course, that won't happen.
Star Wars: Skywalker
Phim ảnh · Link_Id
Surthum2 years ago
bình luận
bruh this present tense pov... I dislike it very much :(
The orb of light is an expectant soul in waiting to be reincarnated as that very person, with no knowledge that the universe he was to reborn in will not be the same he has originally come to know of.
Star Wars: Skywalker
Phim ảnh · Link_Id

The Way of Water

Harry and Sirius visit a Muggle museum and find a mysterious scroll protected by magic. Curious, they decide to "borrow" the parchment to find out what secrets were inside. What they find wasn't was expected, but Harry makes the most of it and because of that the war will change its tides.

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