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True, this is Op superpower, but the main question is the lvl of the world and who had this skill.
Ya, because of this theres was amazing fanfic, and some trashs. The author is the key of this, and these aspect is the minamal for optimze a fanfic, or a original story.
yeas but not directly, money is the core who conects all humans intersts, so its could let some humans comitt sins for get money, and he can extrat the essense of that sinner. But not from the money directly.
Good point, but not every children in this kind of situation was because their parents not love them, some are because of complicated stuff, money, drugs, fear, etc...
True True, make so sense. Globalization mess it up.
True, I'm an inexperienced author, although your trip to the magical world was a little bad, if I were to rewrite it I would do a lot of things differently, But that's the point, there's always room for improvement. But I believe it worked enough.
It would be a development too, although I planned to put Draco's mother and sister in the main core of the Hogwarts arc, so I made another scheme for him to obtain the supposed magical powers.
He was not that bad! You would open a demoniac book, Don't you?
Me alegra que te haya gustado. En general, esa batalla mental fue un experimento en mi escritura. Aunque habría escrito de manera más extensa detallando cada proceso, abandoné la idea porque resultaría en unos 10 capítulos. Sentí que era innecesario extenderlo tanto y preferí avanzar hacia los próximos arcos. Creo que mi prisa dejó algunos puntos, voy a releer todo y ver si necesita edición.
There are two responses to the difference, curiosity or threat, in fact it is related to who and their prejudices etc. He looks like an albino child there, a rare medical case but nothing too abnormal, as his distinct features are restricted while in human form.
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As for gains in demonic essence, I think this can be quantified in a simpler way, I will work on it,
Interesting, but this would be a direct development of the grimoire, I didn't plan to use a more complete system, the grimoire was an intermediate solution, although it is difficult to quantify things, for example X character is stronger than Y, and how much stronger he is, games and even cultivation novels create Power Levels for comparison... Or creative examples like Dbz which measured fighting power in total numbers... In general this would be laborious and the purpose of this series is more focused on the political path, power , control etc. Not necessarily just fights and battles. Although I love writing fights.
Its true, but how many time, and if there a way for replace the energy, Hp magic has so many holes!
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She was no comom sense! hadhash
You predicted correctly, something like a priestess, I'm working on that, an aspect I'm working on for the next arc.