See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Very well written so far. Only a few grammar mistakes but a great story

I was thinking the same thing

The face off I’v been wai on ting

Great story so far. Well written with a great pace. Can’ wait to read more.

Good story so far, setting a firm base early is a great way to catch the readers eye

Very good story so far, seems like the creator is having fun with this story so far

Great story line so far, keep up the great work

Awesome story so far. Im hooked

I admire the sacrifice she made for her son, you gave very quickly become my new favorite author

Love this story so far im hooked can barely stop reading to get things done

Amazing so far