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Bimbroz

Bimbroz

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2020-12-28 đã tham giaIndonesia
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  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz13h
    trả lời ThatLonelyGuy85

    Kein did not understand the definition of "death" in this sentence. The system offers a fairly instant way to become an above-average professional athlete. If he refuses, then he is "death". That is, he will get nothing even if he struggles. Kein has the skills but it's not enough to be the best. So the system says Kein will 'die' because the system knows what is best for him. And rejection in any form will derail his career as a professional athlete. Maybe you forgot that the main theme of this novel is slice of life. Then, real death might not exist. I hope this answers your disappointment. I'm very grateful for your criticism.[img=recommend]

    [If you choose 'No', then the only way is for you to fight hard to eliminate this 'system' from your body. Basically, this 'system' was born because of your need and determination to become a professional athlete. If the first option is not possible, there is still another option. The other option is for you to die and the system will stop working on your body].
    Hall Of Fame System
    Thể thao · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz1d
     công bố

    Author here![img=proud][img=proud] I really can't believe the time has come to write a novel, with a 'system' and 'slice of life' theme. This is the first time I've ventured into a system novel, as I had no confidence in my abilities before. I hope you will enjoy this novel and don't hesitate to give me any suggestions or criticism if necessary. I would really appreciate your judgement. Thanks and Enjoy it! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Hall Of Fame System
    Thể thao · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz3mth
     công bố

    Author Review Here! Decided to write a fantasy novel about Gods and Demons. It tells the story of a Goddess who gets lost in a forest to seek help in seizing the throne of the Gods from the Demon King. There she meets a former soldier, Xavier, forcing him to become her aide and bring down the Demon King's dynasty in Heaven. I believe it will be very complicated but fun for me. 😀

    Helper Of The Goddess
    Kỳ huyễn · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz1yr
     công bố

    Author here. First, Calamity Order is my first global novel. I don't expect much on the results but consistently will keep going. Then the novel generally tells about the adventures of a young man who wants to see the world with both eyes on his own. Got a lot of inspiration from various movies, games, and anime. Hope you guys like it and don't hesitate to review

    Calamity Order
    Kỳ huyễn · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Pindah Rumah
    Athlete vs Academician
    Thành thị · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Pindah Rumah
    Athlete vs Academician
    Thành thị · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    Baru baca beberapa chapter kak. Ceritanya menarik dan ketagihan walau jarang baca tentang novel romance CEO. Mungkin yang harus diperhatiin tanda bacanya aja. Semangat nulisnya kak [img=recommend]

    Selalu Ada untukmu
    Thành thị · RinaMardiana_22
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận

    Baru chapter pertama udah nasib buruk aja 😓

    Selamat Membaca
    Selalu Ada untukmu
    Thành thị · RinaMardiana_22
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    Overall novelnya bagus kak. Dari segi penulisan sudah rapi dan gaya bahasa juga baku, cocok dengan nuansa roman historis. Latar Waktunya yg dipakai juga cukup menarik karena sangat lampau [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    THE MOORS : LOST KINGDOM
    Lịch sử · RIBY6_NABE
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận

    Latar waktunya sangat tua sekali ya kak [img=recommend]

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    THE MOORS : LOST KINGDOM
    Lịch sử · RIBY6_NABE
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    kisah cinta waktu SMA. jadi keinget masa sekolah dulu. ceritanya bagus dan pemilihan kata udah bagus kak. semangat nulisnya [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Cinta Yang Belum Kelar
    Hiện thực · Z3e_zeesty
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    Bagus ini ceritanya. Sahabat yang biasanya akur ini justru saling bersaing gara-gara satu lelaki. Nggak sabar nunggu Lanjutannya [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Sekretaris Pipi
    Thành thị · iga_emilia
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    Terlepas author pemula atau bukan,jalan cerita udah bagus banget. Penulisan juga udah rapi. Bahkan jauh di atas kata "pemula" 😁 Semangat nulisnya kak [img=recommend]

    Another Part Of Me?
    Kinh dị ma quái · Yahya_I
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    Nuansa baru nih. Belum pernah baca genre romantis kayak gini. Jadi gak sabar nunggu lanjutannya [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    HIGH CLASS JOMBLO
    Thanh xuân · Mufy_Mc
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận
    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    My Werewolf System
    Kỳ huyễn · JKSManga
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Pindah Rumah
    Athlete vs Academician
    Thành thị · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    bình luận

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Pindah Rumah
    Athlete vs Academician
    Thành thị · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
     công bố

    Novel ini, jujur berat banget temanya. Bacanya harus pelan2 biar bisa memahami isi cerita. Tapi bukan berarti buruk. Novel seperti ini memang ada ketertarikan sendiri bagi mereka yang suka tema peperangan. Tapi tetap the best menurutku, ceritanya menarik 😁

    Swords Of Resistance: Endless War [Indonesia]
    Kỳ huyễn · VLADSYARIF
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    trả lời VLADSYARIF

    Makasih kak. Novel ini berdasarkan kisah nyata, walau enggak sepenuhnya 😁

    Athlete vs Academician
    Thành thị · Bimbroz
    detail
  • Bimbroz
    Bimbroz2yr
    trả lời Saefudin_6163

    Makasih kak, hehe 😀

    Athlete vs Academician
    Thành thị · Bimbroz
    detail