Quetzenel

Or idiots… (me😐)

This is the type of story I’ve wanted for a while, I have high hopes. Thanks for writing this Mr. Author. For now idk if I’ll read it to the end but as long as nothing goes wrong I think I will. <3

I agree that’s most likely but damn I want it to be a double cross. Would make me happy (:

I’m pretty sure Joseph is correct, I think it was in the really early chapters and the time where he completely stopped time for a few seconds. If I’m misremembering then I apologize (:

HELL YEAAAAA, CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (:

So the curse continues… how does every author suffer the same problems lol. Maybe go out and touch some grass, I might have to take that advice too. Well good luck (:

lol what is it with authors always having trouble with either internet or sickness. Like 4/5 of the books I’ve enjoyed have authors with problematic circumstances. At least you got the better of the 2 (maybe). Thanks for writing anyways. Have a good day. (:

Also, I think it would be a good thing to keep it in. I keep thinking charlotte seems too good to be true because any time a main character says “I can trust her with everything”, “she was the person I cared about most”, “she was perfect”, and probably a lot of other ones that I can’t remember anymore, it normally feels like she is the one who betrayed him. So unless that is true I would reccomend keeping in the experiences of his past life with her. The reason I say that makes me think she betrays him is because if a character is hyped up too much, it makes it really hard for the author to live up to the expectations they set, so the easier path is to make those expectations false from the start. Honestly I really enjoy this book so I hope you keep writing lol. If you don’t listen to me that’s fine too, I’m still gonna read it all and enjoy it. And the most important part about writing is to write the story you find entertaining (coming from a guy who could never write to save his life). (:

lol I had no idea there was a “trash” location… that’s sorta funny to me

This gives me last boss energy if it’s not the main character saying it… I pray I’m wrong