Mad_man13

I feel if nyra or their child are dead what was the point of this it feels like needless suffering. At this point in the story

Buu, was able to shatter dimensions by yelling

If he has a power level of 8,500 he should be strong enough to destroy the planet. I mean piccolo when he was training gohan for the saiyan invasion destroyed the moon with a power level of around 1,000

Freiza is currently multiversal. If you talking about frieza when he was first introduced then yeah you would have somewhat of a case, but even in his first form he destroyed a planet with a single finger.

I thought he played the game so shouldn’t he know about flowery

Constructive criticism: want you to know this doesn’t come from a place of malice. Just a want for better storytelling. You can take it or leave it. But I’ve read a butt ton of stories on Webnovel. Too many wishes even with the draw back of a highly dangerous area. And his first wish was more like 3 wishes, he should only get one character trait from jujutsu kaisen. It’s more or less a way to cheese the system. Personally I think it’s way more interesting for the character to just reincarnate with no wishes and use there wit and knowledge of the world to there advantage. Like meditation from an early age to acces nen when there young or something along those lines. If you are going to give them a wish make it a single wish that won’t break the scales of the verse. Number one rule of stories the fun and interesting stuff happens from the restrictions you place on your charachter/world or power system and while it’s ok to give him a free boon, but to much and the story will hold no weight. Because as soon as he gets out of the dangerous situation he was put in because of his wishes it’ll likely be smooth sailing.

10/10 one of the best written stories ive read. Grammar and sentence structure is really good and i love the story so far

This is truly an incredible story that will draw anyone who reads it in. One of my favorite that I have read.

Genderbend him

This one