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He would but he's supposed to have inherited powers as well. So basically when the time comes he'll have two

oof yes he did, need to reword that part real quick thanks

Thanks man, gon fix all em typos

This will be an experimental novel of mine. I will make this with the intention to reach the books ending even if there are some things that don't make sense or chapters that aren't written good. I reviewed this novel based on what I think of it you can choose to read it and see for yourself what it's rating should be.

In hindsight maybe I should have explained that in more detail. The mouth opening was alive, and since Sicarius hid Caretaker inside it, assuming that Caretaker was near death, he gave Caretaker a source of vitality that Caretaker absorbed from turning him into a healthy young man free of any injury.

No, she herself is the weapon

I shamelessly rate this with the highest marks, simply because for me, this is the best, the best that I can do for now. I made this story because I love wacky Ideas like aliens and cowboys or ninjas in space. Well, I tried going for a martial arts in the zombie apocalypse. It's really enjoyable making up these people and stories. If I could could do better in some parts I would appreciate all critiques, and if I did well then it is very great to hear. If you like it then I would appreciate you're support, if not, thanks for giving it a read, and if you didn't read it, thanks for reading this review. Have a good day!

I still have to thank you, as you gave me feedback and your time!

I'll definitely keep that mind, thanks for giving it a chance!