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stop crying its a joke lil bro

Keep it quiet u not hard

Great response author keep uo the good work

Great story but looks like the author dropped it so i guess that sucks

I read up to 165. The book is overall pretty good but after the 100th chapter its like the Author wants to kill his own novel tbh. The authir isn't able to write a compelling villain that you can actually hate, he just makes an insufferable and annoying villain (Kevin) that is a chore to read and then in the ULTIMATE CONFRONTATION where the MC prevails over the odds and lays all his cards on the table he is able to defeat the enemy despite being outnumbered 30:1, it is one of the best scenes in the novel or it would be BUT the most irritating character Kevin is mysteriously able to survive all of this and is able to witness the MC's most important secret which is that he possesses a dragon, which is something that everyone wants and I can see that this is what the author most likely plans to be the next conflict but not only is that the worst type of villain, If you are an author don't write your main villain for an entire arc's entire motivation to be a jealous piece of shit who's only purpose it to want something the MC has, it just makes the reader feel like we are reading a game of hot potato and makes us lose any trust in the MC's actual power level or standing in the world. Moral of the review is: Judging from the fact that Kevin, who is the only current alive opposition directly to the MC, is being kept alive by the author and he has lost all his resources to actually have a meaningful fight with the MC it is likely the rest of the secret real arc is just going to make us feel that no matter how strong thr MC gets it really isn't going to matter because Kevin is going to tell everyone about the MC after he leaves abd no matter how strong he gets it wont matter because some powerhouse will be after him and he will have no meanibgful competition on a similar level, AND we will have to be stuck with the annoyance that Kevin is because it it likely that he wont die for some time as that would completely contradict what the author did anyway. If you are going to set up the MC and the Antagonist up for an epic battle at least leave the ending conclusive, the only time this would makes sense is if the Antagonist a Aizen-like in intelligence and depth but don't asspull an annoying antagonist that has no real villain qualities just a jealous asshole and then shove him down our throats for the next 100 or so chapters. Start of the novel 8/10 after the Incident: 2/10. I commend you if you can read last this but come on author

If you genuinely took it at face value that a nigh-omnipotent God was actually deceived by a random dude off the street you might need to ropemaxx and hope for a better iq in your next life lil bro.