Do you like the story?

This book is so interesting and well written.

Nice start. I keep reading.

Thank you. I also have to write since I don't have much time. So kind of a tight schedule. So I try my best

I will leave more commands later. I have a daughter so maybe it will take some time but I try my best. I left a review because I love the book already. So don't worry it's a good readable book.

You have a great writting style and that makes your book readable. I like where the story is going and I for sure want to read much much more of this. Keep up the good work.

You have a decent writing style and the story is in good progress. Keep it up.

Hi interestting story. Only sad that the mother have to kill her one child. I hope his older brother will safe him. Good work keep it up.

I did review it I think

I loved it. There was many adventure in this chapter. So many that I wanted to know more. Good luck and keep up the good work.

Thanks I said your book in my recommendations. It's already very good.

Would you recomand this book to others?

You always give me great advice. Thank you for that.

Nice fantasy story. I would like to read more off this in the future. Also a few tips. Make your chapters more lengthy. Also put more emotion to it. Your book is on the good way. Keep it up.

A bit short, but still good. Maybe you can put some more emotion in it. Still it is a good story. I want to know how the jouney goes on. I will be loyal to this book and keep reading. Keep the good work up.

I loved how much the mv loved dogs. 24 is a bit much but, I think it gave a fun acpect to the story. Also your writing is good. I like your book already. Keep up the good work.

I myself like the book. Your ideas our good. Also the wriiting is fine, but for me it's sometimes difficult to read. Still you are on the good way. Keep up the good work.

I think your writing is good, but also a bit difficult sometimes. Still I am impressed. This ideas our amazing. Also the first chapter devolped well. good work. Keep it up.

Very interesting. I want to start reading more.

I love the memories of Aria and Theo. I would like to know how their adventure goes further. good work. Keep it up.