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The one he wants to avenge is the village chief, he doesn't care if the others are dead.

And with the two ladies, what do you mean? Because as far as I know, 2 ladies do not appear at any time, if you tell me where it appears to see if it is correct or if it needs to be edited, I would appreciate it.

I explain the villagers later, but so that you understand better in case you haven't continued reading, the villagers who reject him are normal people, and then the subordinates are people who are there watching and protecting Xue Sha, by order of the Sect Master, or so that you understand better, his grandfather.

I don't know if I understood you correctly but I am going to answer what I understood you asked me. You have told me that I could have ordered someone else to wash it but that cannot be since of the almost 30 followers they are all men, perhaps if I asked the hotel a woman could have washed it. But doing that has several things that I don't like, I needed a scene for their relationship to improve quickly and for her to get used to being a slave. (maybe if I make them wash each other better) So giving him a name + giving him a shower improves the relationship a lot. And I have a question, do you prefer that the slave become his right hand and run an intelligence organization or do you prefer that she become more like a "head maid" of Xue Sha and is *SPOILER* a descendant of some emperor? of Xing Luo from 100 years ago for example. Maybe I'll end up mixing them, if you have any idea what background to put I would love for you to tell me, I don't know why my ideas seem too cliché to me. I almost forgot, have I answered your question? because my English is quite bad and having to use a translator I don't know exactly what you're asking.

It's a little difficult to explain, so you can understand it against Tang San or if it has to go against him since there can't be 2 "Sons of Luck" in the same world, that's obvious. Then with the Hall of Spirits it is a little more difficult, since first of all if it is against, against which party, against Bibi Dong or against The Great Priest. For now I'm thinking about going to kill against Bibi Dong and maybe help Qian Renxue, or at least have him as an ally. I also tell you, I have in mind that he becomes a prime minister with all the power of the kingdom where he is or something similar, I'll see. In the end you can say that it will kill both sides.

I'm sorry, it's just that at the beginning the novel was going to have another plot so it stayed that way, but don't worry, just pass that at the beginning.

Thank you very much for your comment, the \ error has now been fixed. That happens when I copy the text from one side and paste it here, sometimes those things come out. I would love to let me know if you find any errors.

Sorry for what I'm going to say but, you don't have reading comprehension or what! If you read when the Pope gives Su Yuntao a ring, one with a bow martial spirit shoots 2 arrows, one arrow was for those in the forest to bring him the beast that Su Yuntao needed, the other is the one that arrived at the house of the village chief. The ability of a ring (right now I don't remember what ring it was) of that person is that it can "send an arrow through space." I guess now you understand, I guess when you saw five chapters of Su Yuntao you skipped them so this is what happens. Thank you for your comment, I hope you like my novel.

I don't know why you say that because I never said that Su Yuntao is the protagonist. If you had read Douluo Dalu you would know who he is. If you continue reading you will understand a little better why that is. Maybe you have been confused because I have written 5 chapters of a secondary character. But maybe I have included too much of a secondary character but there are several things that I needed to include and I can't put them in a normal chapter, so that's how those chapters were born, for example where x city is and how long it takes to get from x to y. The AI ​​thing, I don't use it to create the chapter, I use it as if it were an editor, that is, I give it a draft and the AI ​​improves it and tells me you have x errors, change it or this thing doesn't match the other one. So there is no error, what there may be error is that when translating it into English things change and some things that sound good in Spanish in English look bad.

My apologies if you find any errors in this chapter, as I experienced insomnia last night and woke up very late. I only had about 40 minutes to write it, whereas I typically have 3 to 4 hours. Additionally, for those who dislike what might be considered "filler" chapters, I would like to inform you that in the next chapter, if possible, I will include a fight scene.