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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

80,000 Golden Fireball Technique! Go!

How disappointing…

“There was a crack mine”

It already has. Have you forgotten how you got here already?

Watch it be Secretive Plotter 😂

Just a suggestion: when writing for general audiences, it’s usually best to keep the use of jargon to a minimum. This is because it can distract the reader from the story, make them bored, or possibly cause them to feel that reading the book takes too much brain power. None of these outcomes are desirable; especially for webnovels. In this paragraph, simply stating something along the lines of “blood magic alters the mind and induces amnesia” would have been more effective. However, I understand that such specific word usage may be normalized, and hence, natural to use. If your anything like me, you might even want to use these words to teach your readers or establish a certain feeling. So, if you feel that this information is something that must be shared, or you just really want to share it with your readers, then finding more natural ways to implement them is the best option. For example, a doctor explaining anatomy to a 9 year old, only for the MC to internally state that he already knows this. So, by all means, use whatever jargon you want. Use whatever obscure and crazy words you want! After all, I can’t tell you how to write (and I also happen to love such words). But just remember to use them sparingly. When, writing for general audiences, of course.

Nah, that's the result of abuse my dude. You should probably deal with that sometime.

Correct response. We can neither confirm nor deny if this is, in fact: A) Amon B) Klein disguised as Amon C) A butler invoking PTSD