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This has to be AI generated.
This story reads like a bad parody. Nothing makes sense. How did the mc get the loyalty of all the class S members? How did he communicate with them once they became trators? The mcs plan wud have been derailed if just one class S member decided to be an actual traitor cause they were all carrying out different tasks. Why is the match judge helping class A and not getting called up on it once it is revelead?
Energybending is possible.
If you needed a character thats good at mechanics anakin is literally right there.
Meeting with onoki.
The slum woman and her child fulfilled their role. Further attempts to prolong their relevance to the story is unwarranted. They dont need to be plot armoured into Padme's entourage.
Why would you skip the most important interaction the mc has had to date.
Mc must have fought the only three soldiers in the fire nation army who werent benders.
Novel gotten stale. Mc has a solution to every scenario and faces no challenges. How are minor akatsuski members resisting Iwa intelligence gathering efforts.
keep chapter length as is