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This is the written equivalent of someone that likes to listen to the sound of their own voice a little too much. 95% exposition 5% action. Author has too high of an opinion of himself and thinks hes capable of writing a grand inspirational scene. Somehow managed to make it more eyerolling than those cliched scenes in shounen. Gj.
It already happened once. If you dont have the presence of mind to prevent the same mistake from happening its on you.
So the mc is not only super op but faces no difficulty bringing ppl to his side. Wow, how exiciting.
Cause author doesnt know any other way to get his point across than by making mobs speak baseless rumors.
Cringe. There are so many ways to depict the mcs feelings for his master and author chose the most cliche childish way to do it. Still relying on mobs speaking baseless rumours to forward the plot. Cmon bruh move on.
Why is the higest class called E not EX or something. Its so confusing.
Bruh didnt you have this same thing happen before. You only have urself to blame. Is it really so difficult to use word or notepad?
No primeval essence stones used in recipe?
This is so bad. How does the mc have some magical healing ability now?
Looks good so far, has potential.