It’s 3 steps better good job

Good one.

why don't use the fact that half of he's body was zetsu cells, and tell he was controled etc ... He can even say he learn infiormations to hide he's knowlege of the plot.

Some translation are bad and need to be rewrite but it's a rly good one.

.... Really

No yaoi or yuri able in that world lol

+1 never read a better synopsis in my life

Hooo that novel's so sweet, Only 3 chapters and I think I got diabetes lol . More seriously, characters are really lively and back then well written !

Do you think they haven't already fixed this problem?Cmon even a shadow clone or any elementary clone's enought.

+1

This chapter is truly on another level, probably the best so far! Not because he gained a power-up (even if it was really very well thought out using Hiruzen's greed) but because the characters really gain depth with the interactions, between them, and with the world (konoha). + It was really funny to read.

good one

feel free to take liberty

U have a point dude. But the story can also be good without that, author-san juste have to create a tempo and maybe a good brainstorming HAHA.

Take your time, have fun. But u need some action and difficulties and not a << i will go back in time it’s ok >> forever. good luck !

That story have a great potential ! the time travel power have a lot of possibility, author-san make a great job to structurated that (please don't make that to complicated later). I'm very impatient to see how the MC will deal with his futur friend or love after they forget him or how the power will evovle later !! Don't hesitate to read that story !

It’s ok take a rest. Courage l’ami !

I'll will follow that, i smell a great potential ! Good luck author-san.

Good luck ! Force 🇫🇷

He really dont need spider power, that will proke the tempo and MC personnality