I'm only writing dark fics, not some morally righteous vanilla. That's ridiculously boring in my opinion. Grammar sucks Writing sucks welp atleast I wrote some D tier trash sex scenes
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Where is the romance tag? pfft it was funny to think that he's not a completely evil. Yes he is ruthless and selfish but base on his personality he's just a broken kid nothing more. He even told his pastlife to his Lover, he's not a mistake lol he's just a experiment.. not someone who has defied the odds, I might say that the pacing is good, the character development is also decent. The only problem is the vague type of writing and using words repetitive. like as if it' Nevertheless, Nonetheless. And describing the actions weakly. I'm not a good writer myself but I could atleast share my opinions to improve.
Let's assume that the sacred gear gave him knowledge about supernatural world. Plus I want to exploit some of his weakness sometimes, I don't want to write Gary stue who's completely logical everytime that's not a human person at all. But yea I'm working with that.. somehow If i don't get bored I will write heehehe
RWBY is pretty good choice but I'll leave the decisions after 2nd season
i want to leave DxD for a bit after season 2.
Dragon is kinda overused, God is a long way to go.
Noe, She already lost it to her former teacher
Not sure but I'm still looking for ideas and friendly beginner editors
Yah yah, I'm just changing the plot because I felt unsatisfied
maybe you can drink my milk
Most of the powerful organization that time was aware that Kojou is the successor, they just didn't make a move yet.