Evil_Peppa
I'm only writing dark fics, not some morally righteous vanilla. That's ridiculously boring in my opinion. Grammar sucks Writing sucks welp atleast I wrote some D tier trash sex scenes
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Evil_Peppa3yrcông bốWhere is the romance tag? pfft it was funny to think that he's not a completely evil. Yes he is ruthless and selfish but base on his personality he's just a broken kid nothing more. He even told his pastlife to his Lover, he's not a mistake lol he's just a experiment.. not someone who has defied the odds, I might say that the pacing is good, the character development is also decent. The only problem is the vague type of writing and using words repetitive. like as if it' Nevertheless, Nonetheless. And describing the actions weakly. I'm not a good writer myself but I could atleast share my opinions to improve.
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời meatball_san
Let's assume that the sacred gear gave him knowledge about supernatural world. Plus I want to exploit some of his weakness sometimes, I don't want to write Gary stue who's completely logical everytime that's not a human person at all. But yea I'm working with that.. somehow If i don't get bored I will write heehehe
Ch 17 Yo;; - Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời HermesTheGodCh 17 Yo;;
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời SynchroreachCh 17 Yo;;
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời LawWillOblivionKCh 17 Yo;;
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời Lord_Rimuru
Noe, She already lost it to her former teacher
She also wanted to spend more time with her step brother Natsuo who is also her student in another class. He had confessed to her, but she rejected knowing that it was probably just a high school crush that was bound to fade over time. But she admired his guts for actually confessing to his teacher, not many would dare to do it. - Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời God_of_all_godsCh 4 Dropped
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời God_of_all_godsCh 4 Dropped
- Evil_Peppa3yrbình luận
maybe you can drink my milk
*Worried* "There must be something I can do for you…" Sally added. - Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời EvilWolf
Most of the powerful organization that time was aware that Kojou is the successor, they just didn't make a move yet.
(Note: He was mentioning the Protagonist of the canon, Akatsuki Kojou) - Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời Flamableslug
Thanks I will change i later, ugh so cliche
"Living life is beautiful, no regrets doing the things that I love HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DIE!" With a final laugh he opened his robe showing a green colored stone attached to his chest. - Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời LawWillOblivionK
Bro? I'm not a bro tho, whatever
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- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời Rimuru_samaCh 3 Family
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời Na1gelCh 3 Family
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời Daoist3vXS3LCh 2 Rebirth, a huge problem
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời Marco_Busa
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời gonzalo_aguirre
- Evil_Peppa3yrtrả lời AristocratX2
Lol I hope i was you, I didn't even get a free time because of work and studies. If I was born rich then maybe I would write for y'all guys hehe..
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