ok author ii m so lost in this story there literally no story plot like getting stronger, or trying to find a way home, to me this story seems half assed no offense the mc is too childish and yes I get the fact that he's a kid but like wtf, the kid went through battles and is still childish ash and to top it off you have pongo who serves no purpose and tbh with you as a author myself ik a kid with immortal parents who have destroyed galaxies wouldn't allow for their to get spoiled and the kid has also gone through battle this story is literally fucked

surprisingly, it's not too different from the other system novels but I'm enjoying it, Ashton has a lot of potential just as a viewer don't make him too op bc it will just get boring and predictable, but overall I like it soooo in conclusion keep up the work my fellow Arthur

thanks, and if you have any suggestions just tell me I'm always open for them even if its criticism all feedback is welcome.

towards the end, he unlocks his mana sorry if u were confused

Hey guys shameless Author review trust me to give it a shot when I start uploading I promise it will be worth your time, also I hope this story ends up as good as lust knight you should go over there and read their book I don't want my main character as much of a women collector though. no offense to anyone though, to next peace