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InfiniteIshaan

InfiniteIshaan

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  • InfiniteIshaan
    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời Regular_Sama

    A... I like you noticed it. And ahh... it's intentionally written in that way. Don't worry, the master is still an old lady.

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    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    Dude, it's 2099. Here getting a smartphone is like getting a 25 paisa coin. Another point that backs this up is he never been in the actual world down there. And yeah he dumb, and gonna get more in the future.

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    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    Also to answer this, they are playing at A-Level November 2099. The season still ongoing. Rule: The top 100 out of 300 racers from this race are allowed to participate in A4 Race. Here Darkov (R2) is ranked 5th.

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    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    For this, I have my own bounded rules which are not meant to be explained right now. But, as you asked, to answer this I must say, here forfeiting only affects on rewarded $P only. Here, no one is a winner or a loser. Yup, he forfeits, which means he drawbacks when staying in 5th place, what he had done till then is no gonna shad over. This is what I made this of, correct me if I m wrong.

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    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    Let points = rewarded $P, which is completely based on the Final Score of a gamer, and then Final Score is based on player performance neither rank nor things like crossing the finish line / disqualifying. One thing that matters is forfeiting, which no matter how good one did, will always results in 0$P.

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  • InfiniteIshaan
    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    First, thanks for the read and marking my mistakes. I do appreciate it. And Yeah, I do have the plot to show his life and training in between the time skip. But I don't think it's the right time. Currently, the story is focused around A-Level only.

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  • InfiniteIshaan
    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    I understand your point, and I do know it should be like "how do you do that?". But yeah writing as a script or a dialogue, it all went on characters and their behaviors. Writing dialogue to a character must express his feeling/behavior here they speaking as they want without things less or more for grammar. Like here, "How do you do that?" is Grammarly correct, but "How you do that?" is "(surprise)" correct. Btw you must understand it's a dialogue, someone speaking. and rarely people care for grammar, and in situations like "surprise", grammar is the last thing to think. So, here I do think that "how you do that?" is correct cause it adds surprise feel to the character. Anyway, thanks. if I over-explain it sorry. and yeah there are a lot of dialogues I have written like this best fitting for the situation, but I'm also afraid did I did too much.

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  • InfiniteIshaan
    InfiniteIshaan3yr
    trả lời PARTHAM

    Corrected

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