I really liked what I've read so far, the only big problem being the lack of updates. Improve this, and the book's big problem will be solved.

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I think you can take out the quest part, but make Smoker realize that he must kill Blackbeard himself. Other than that, this is one of the best One Piece fics I've ever read.

5 - Fairy Tail

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Essa é uma das melhores fics de MHA que eu já li, o único problema é que demora para atualizar, autor mande mais capítulos.

Muito boa a fic, eu só acho o MC um pouco OP demais, mas fora isso é uma ótima leitura. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Apart from the fact that the author often makes grammatical errors that make reading a little more difficult, this fanfic is wonderful, I will enthusiastically follow your progress.

The fan-fic is very good, and has a good growth of the protagonist, but it fails a little with several holes in the story and neglected the other characters of the work. Personally I was a little disappointed with the ending and the super OP powers that the MC ends up having. But it is a great work to read if you have nothing to do.