Arrowinmyknee

Feels AI written... and at this point the fourth Shinobi World War would start. Pretty much that happened what itachi and shisui feared, just the other Clans did the Coup. no way the other villages didn't start a war.

Oh come on, not the random powerful character that suddenly appears in the FF, that hasn't even any sign of existence, not even when the whole country was invaded by another in Canon.

Nah you aren't dumb. Knowledge is power. Even just listening would give him a lot information about the world he is living in.

*post death

that's not True. The Naruto universe has Planetary level threads Kaguya, Madara, Obito, Natuto, Sasuke and so on theoretical there could be even cosmic level threads with Hagoromo ppost earth and Shiba Otsuki, while the highest in one piece is Multi Continental Continental with Whitebeard.

doesn't feel cliche at all. It would have been a cliche if the MC was Jon Snow or something. But you wrote a compelling Dragon MC, and choose a pairing you thought fit. Though I am a bit disappointed that it isn't another dragon. In the end it's your story and you should write what you feel is right.

And this is where I am out in this story. If the Author doesn't even know the difference between a basic Clone and a Shadow Clone, it just means that he is too lazy to do proper research.

Damn this became boring and stretched out. And I write that around chapter 600 there are still over 800 to go from the Original. The Villains have the Plot Armor and get buffed beyond reason. Nagato has for example unlocked Limbo on the same level as Madara fucking Uchiha in the original after he became the Jinchuuriki of the Juubi, and no Nagato is not a Jinchuuriki he just got the Plot device Hashirama Cells boosting him beyond reason.

I hope he falls for Kushina and follows her to Uzugakure instead.

isn't this right after the Kyubi attack, that means Asuma is like 15-16 and didn't even leave yet for the Guardian Ninjas. That happens 7 years before the series, so in around 5 years.